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Did I miss a whisper


10.08.11 Posted in today's words by

John J McKenna’s most recent poem to appear here was #6 Uptown: Summer (August 2011). 

Did I miss a whisper
By John J McKenna

Did I miss a whisper
a night utterance
some clue
cast into air
from beneath the blanket of night
and nocturne
and sleep?

Did I miss a whisper
a small appendix to a prayer
while eyes still closed,
hands together,
fingers intertwined,
head bowed?

Did I miss a whisper
a hush beneath breath confession
tangled and twisted within a mutter and a mumble?

Did I miss a whisper
exhaled in exhaustion,
in regret, in reflection?

No, I think not.

I neither slept, nor closed my eyes,
nor stopped listening
intently, intensely, acutely.

What you said was enough,
what you omitted unforgettable.



6 Responses to “Did I miss a whisper”

  1. I love the mystery of this.

  2. bobbie troy says:

    I too love the mystery and also the haunting feel and the repetition of the question.

  3. john says:

    Jeanette – thank you for taking time to share your thoughts & for your kind encouragement. Best & be well, jmck

  4. john says:

    Bobbie – thank you too for taking time to share your thoughts & for your kind encouragement. Best & be well, jmck

  5. Gigi says:

    I like the clarity and affirmation that reveals itself after the reflection and searching.

  6. GT says:

    I like the ultimate clarity and affirmation that reveals itself from the searching.

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