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02.05.12 Posted in today's words by

Mildred Speidel’s most recent post to appear here was New Year Hopes (December 2011).

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By Mildred Speidel

What is there left to say?
I am this bucket, holes
are in the bottom.

Some days I feel a bit
more refreshed. The
rains come, then just

as quickly, drop by drop
I am again empty. Waiting
for another touch, even if

it is the morning dew, it will
help take away the emptiness.
Now the time has come

My own tears fill the bucket
daily. They drip out and down
the side of the well. I must

find a way to fall into this endless
supply of refreshing. Push me,
push me hard, make me fall.

I would rather stay submerged
in the waters from the heavens
than drown in my own tears.






8 Responses to “untitled”

  1. Debbie says:

    This is beautiful, Mildred, and blessed me. Thank you!

  2. Jea says:

    Wow…just,WOW.

  3. bobbie troy says:

    Very powerful, Mildred.

  4. Mildred Speidel says:

    To Debbie….I am so very pleased that something I shared was a blessing. What more could one ask. Thank you. Stay blessed!

    Jea…A WOW sounds like mucic to my ears. Thanks for taking the time to coment. It means so very much.

    bobbie troy…Now WOW is my comment. When I see your works, I say your the best. For you to say, more than once now, something encourging to me, it is priceless! I am amazed….Thanks to all of you!

  5. I couldn’t stop reading. I wanted to know where you would carry me. Heart wrenching.

  6. Mildred Speidel says:

    I must apologize for my spelling skills! I should say lack of them. It was just brought to my attention and I am very sorry about that. Thanks not only for your comments, but your patience. I need eye surgery, so I actually type with one eye shut! I do aplogize. Thanks!

  7. mildred speidel says:

    Jeanette…Thank you for your lovely comments. You are always supportive of me. I wasn’t sure where I was taking any of us, when I started writing. I write what I feel at that space of them. It seems it took at least four of us somewhere special. That is what matter’s. Have a great day! Thanks again.

  8. bobbie troy says:

    You’re welcome, Mildred! And the spelling is not important, it’s the sentiment. But i guess there are lots of editors in the audience (including me).

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