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A Swell About to Burst


08.12.11 Posted in today's words by

Adina Rosenthal believes she’s been a writer for years, but only decided to put her thoughts on paper recently. She has forthcoming poems in both print and online publications and a short story to appear in Gus Ginsberg’s anthology The Bride of Golem. She lives in Arlington VA with her boyfriend Dan and their pet snake Nora. Visit her blog.

A Swell About to Burst
By Adina Rosenthal

It’s not often I feel this way.
There were so many promises
so many disappointments.
The lies and deceit that deflated
a balloon trying to soar through the clouds
only to be drowned by a deluge of
tears. I feel something wet upon my cheeks.
I think it’s the rain.
It washes over me.
The balloon pops.
And I am
floating.



3 Responses to “A Swell About to Burst”

  1. Diana E. Backhouse says:

    Love this, Adina.

  2. bobbie troy says:

    Lovely, Adina. Welcome to vox poetica. I also live in VA (Culpeper County).

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