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Sad Dreams


12.02.10 Posted in words to linger on by

James G Piatt’s poem, Words Upon a Plaque, was published as part of Contributor Series 6: A Currency of Words in September 2010. This poem is different in form from the poems James usually writes. The structure complements the theme.

Sad Dreams

By James G Piatt

Hopes and dreams collide in veiled caverns
In his mind making past events of reality
A confusing collage of time and space


Faces

Smiles

Frowns

Brown eyes

Anger

Love

Fears


All transformed into a ghostly umbra
Like ghastly Chinese masks juxtaposed
One upon the other until they become
A confused and paradoxical aloneness
He sits in an empty office wondering
How life eluded him and why he didn’t feel
The draining of time from his existence
As each day was born and died and
He was no more than a bystander in life
Where did sunsets and pink clouds disappear
When did the


Seconds

Minutes

Hours

Days

Years

Fade away how did he miss the beautiful opportunities
And meaningful dialogues as he played at
Living with hollow actions and impulsive decisions
How sad it is to remember that he lived his life
In little teacups when he could have filled it with
Thunderous buckets of fruitful living




6 Responses to “Sad Dreams”

  1. bobbie troy says:

    Wow, very powerful. I think most of us can relate to this poem. Carpe Diem.

  2. Gracie says:

    A sad and beautiful work of art!

  3. james g. piatt says:

    Thank you Jeanette, I appreciate it!

    james

  4. JAMES G. PIATT says:

    THANK YOU BOBBIE, I NEVER THOUGHT OF IT AS UNIVERSAL, BUT NOW THAT I READ IT AGAIN, I GUESS IT VERY WELL IS! THANK YOU.

    JAMES

  5. JAMES G. PIATT says:

    GRACIE: WOW….THAT TOUCHED ME! THANK YOU.

    JAMES

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