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Waterfall


01.20.12 Posted in today's words by

Kayli Adina Breen is a seven-year-old from Minnesota. She lives with her mom, dad, sister Chloe, brother Brody, and dog Louie. Kayli loves to write, just like her Mama, who blogs at These Little Waves.

Waterfall
By Kayli Adina Breen

It sparkles in my eyes
Like a stream that was lifted
Up up up
On a rock or a thin cliff
It is so beautiful
Some short
Some long
I love waterfalls.





11 Responses to “Waterfall”

  1. SARI says:

    a lovely poem
    Thank you.

  2. Sarah says:

    I love this poem.

  3. Laura says:

    Delightful imagery… Very powerful! 🙂

  4. Sharon Poch says:

    Kayli, you are an amazing poet! “Like a stream that was lifted/ Up, up up” are my favorite lines.
    How lucky are you to have a whole lifetime ahead of you to fill the world with your beautiful words.
    You go, girl!
    Sharon

  5. bobbie troy says:

    What a great poem, Kayli. I love the image of a stream being lifted up. Keep writing. It’s fun!

  6. Shanon says:

    Well done, Kayli! I like waterfalls, too and I love your little poem. Keep writing, young lady!

  7. Julie says:

    Beautiful visual imagery, Kayli. I found myself sitting by your beautiful waterfall. I can’t wait to read more from you.
    Julie

  8. Jean says:

    Kayi, what a lovely image. I could picture the waterfall. Write a poem every morning and share them with the world!

  9. Rae Spencer says:

    Kayli, I love this little poem. I’m so happy that you wrote it! I look forward to seeing more and more of your poetry published in the coming years.

  10. Rita says:

    Kayli
    I love your poem!

    Rita

  11. Kay Middleton says:

    I love how this sparkles in my brain!

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