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Summer


08.16.09 Posted in student's writings, today's words by

Who better to speak to the joys of summer than a kid sprung from school! Coby Breen will be returning to the confinement of school next month. He is entering the seventh grade. He is also a talented goalie, training in elite programs and keeping penalty kicks off the scoreboard for his soccer club. The simplicity of his poem speaks for all of us as we cling to the last days of this glorious season.

Summer
By Coby Breen

The hot day,
Sun blazing,
No escape from the heat.
Water evaporating,
Sticky,
Melting away.
Time to play,
Pools open,
No school.
All fun!
Vacations.
Summer.



5 Responses to “Summer”

  1. Jean says:

    What a great word picture of summer, Coby. It makes me wish it would stay all year.

  2. Bravo! Wonderful poem!

  3. Sharon Poch says:

    Coby, you make me feel young again. How wonderful is the sun and sand and sea.
    Sharon

  4. Shelby A. Breen says:

    I love this poem! I love the way you wrote it Coby. If you are looking for a fall back career you got it right here!!!!!

  5. Siobhan says:

    hey coby awesome poem I LOVE IT